In this Romance writing contest, our judges will evaluate your fiction-writing skills, as well as your understanding of the commercial Romance formula.

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Pacing and Plot: (30 Points Possible)

1. Has the author established emotional tension, escalating that tension in a consistent and convincing way between the lovers? (15 points)
2. Has the author established sexual tension, escalating that tension in a consistent and convincing way between the lovers? (15 points)

Point of View: (10 Points Possible)

1. Is the POV character clearly identified (including gender) in the first paragraph? (2 points)
2. Does the style of narration put us inside the POV character’s head? Does the narration help the reader connect with the emotions experienced by both characters? (6 points)
3. If the POV character changes in mid-scene, is the transition smooth and logical? Does the POV shift build the emotional and sexual tension between the lovers? (2 points)*

*Note: if no change occurs in the POV, the writer will be awarded 2 points, by default, for this criterion.

Characterization: (50 Points Possible)

1. Has the author made both characters complex, interesting, and memorable? (15 points)
2. Has the author established clear goals, motivations, and conflicts for the POV character? (15 points)
3. Has the author revealed the internal conflict that makes the POV character afraid to fall in love? (10 points)
4. Has the author revealed the goals, motivations, and conflicts for the lover of the POV character? (10 points)

General: (15 Points Possible)

1. Did the author follow standard formatting procedure? (A “no” will disqualify the entry.)
2. Is the entry free of typos and errors in punctuation and grammar? (3 points)
3. Is the author’s voice suitable for the Romance subgenre, which was designated on the entry form? (3 points)
4. Is the scene clearly anchored in time and place? (4 points)
5. Does the writing come alive? Is the author masterfully balancing “showing” and “telling” language throughout the scene? (5 points)